
so I was looking at random articles and I found this one where they used justified columns which caused a few lines to have only like 3 words on a line or they have too many words on a line and its smushed together which is VERY distracting. The lines that have too few words are causing rivers to happen in the article. Also, a few of the paragraphs have widows at the end. I just couldn't pass by this article after I saw these things that are sooo distracting!! I think maybe the leading is a little tight as well. I think if they adjusted this it might help with some of the crimes. Not sure how flush left, ragged right would look but it might also help with some of the rivers.
Now that I know these type crimes, they are hard to miss! :)
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