Type Crime: Use of inch marks instead of quote marks.
Funny! Why even use quotation marks around WE CARE, are they being sarcastic about caring? OH yea "we care" all right...but not really....
Type Crimes:
1. Large gaps in sentences due to justification setting and few words in some sentences.
2. In effect it produces "rivers".
3. Headline needs a space between word VIEW and OF.
4. Copy within picture is hard to read.
5. Using both uppercase and lowercase in the headline. Stick to one or the other.
To fix the rivers and gaps within the copy, I would make the pictures in the middle smaller and increase the text measure length on the second column.
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